If writing is anything like the process God goes through in transforming us, He has His work cut out for Him.
Just change this here to fit there… Ok, now shave off a bit over here.
Wait. Wait! That’s all wrong, need to put this up here as the priority, and switch these two things around over here…
Space. Need a lot of space over here.
The heart, where’s the heart! Oh, Ok, whew! Got it.
Now, some emphasis…. here!
Whoa! Can’t have that in there!
Ok, now a little shaping here, make this thought tighter… Good!
Ok. I think we are about…
Oh, where did that twist come from! Straighten it…just…like…so…
Nevermind, just pull that all the way out.
Ok. It’s done.
I’ll pick up again tomorrow.
Time to get some rest.